ouch the mix
the vi IV I V is strong in this one
its good to see how much you've improved since then :))
ouch the mix
the vi IV I V is strong in this one
its good to see how much you've improved since then :))
good job finding AND criticizing this 3 year old shitty remix, your inputs are taken :)
Nice and chill!
Cheers! ;)
Nice! idk but the start kinda feels empty... i like what you did with the chords and made them major, it's cool! IMO the drops are underpowered, but thats probably because my headphones are broken :/
Thanks!
The intro doesn't really have that much going on in the first place. The drops are weak and that's because of two things: I rushed the mix too much, and I mastered it myself, which is something that I suck at.
Thanks for the feedback.
my only problem is the mixing. at 50, the growls are a bit underpowered, and the drum breakdown at 1 minute feels like it could use some sidechain, as well as a higher volume. and some like 16th arps at 1:15 would be welcome, cause it feels empty there and its kinda not supposed to be. i like how you used gaster's theme at 1: 40 tho. overall, your volume could use a bit of tweaking, but melody is on point. congrats, this is fantastic otherwise.
Thank you for your feedback, as it truly helps what others are hearing that I didn't notice before! I appreciate it! That's very true- now that I've listened to it more intently, the growls are a bit weak in comparison to the entire drive of the song, and true- there needs to be more sidechaining and less "explody" volume tbh- kinda don't wanna scare the listeners haha. Thank you again; I'm looking forward to more of your reviews in the future. :)
kinda creepy but still nice. the detune works well with this.
No clue why the stuff I find pretty, is creepy to so many but oh well.
Thanks. Glad you think it worked.
nice! change the kick tho, or just lowpass the mids out, i personnally dont find them very good sounding.
sorry bout that, kicks are very hard to find the right ones X.X
took no effort
Of course! You can easily access a free website and raise the pitch. I just like it because I think it sounds cool.
Oof you cant change your name on ng lol
gud song btw... idk how you get inspiration to make a simple melody!
Thank you for the support!, yeah Ik I cant change my name..... Also the Melody was just a floating thought in mind! Kinda simple yeah. but, Catchy for me ^^
Like the melody, but kinda cramped, if you get me.
I agree, I had almost no knowledge of composition and mastering when I made this. I always wanted to go back to some of these songs and redo them, but never had the courage to sift through my own messy projects of back then. :)
This is great! I like the overall feel of the track!
Thanks!
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